I like the moment when the black Stickman runs and grabs the mouse pointer. I notice that there is an effort behind coordinating the effects and making everything look like it is happening on a computer screen. What I think is failing is that the story and the way it happens is confusing. I don't fully understand what the black Stickman wants or why this other red one appeared. I personally would prefer to see a Stickman animation made by you but with a story that is not related to the animator versus animation, something original.

It's just a suggestion. If you feel more comfortable working with this idea, you as the artist are the only one who can decide what to do. I think that with more practice animating and making the story easier to understand, your work can greatly increase in quality.

I wish you luck with your next animations! :)

Tiene un concepto y una estética interesante, que los personajes sean elementos de la tabla periódica me parece muy original, me gusta la animación y me gusta el diseño de los personajes y los escenarios

Hay cosas que podrían mejorar, la historia es un poco confusa, no entiendo muy bien qué es lo que quiere el personaje principal, también los efectos de undertale siento que no quedan muy bien dentro de la animación, fuera de eso creo que es un buen proyecto, te felicito sigue adelante :)

Te quedó igualito, creo hasta está mejor animado jajajja, me quede con ganas de que en algun momento rompieras la cuarta pared y criticaras algo de la serie, como broma de primero de abril está buena, felicidades :)

I love the game's art. I think the concept is good, but the execution needs some polish, especially the difficulty.

Placing the blue sheets in safe places to step is good. That way, it's easy to know where to jump or when to brake. The worst part of the game, for me, is the placement of obstacles. It's one obstacle after another, and the precision with which you have to dodge them is very high. My suggestion is to put fewer obstacles (especially in the early levels of the game), give the player more lives, and make it so that obstacles like lasers don't eliminate you just by touching them once.

Great game, it touches on a very important topic, and in my case, it's easy to connect with because that's exactly how my last relationship went.

When we talked, she tended to react in a very similar way to what happens in the game. I believed her behavior was simply because she was going through a lot of problems, and I looked for ways to support her, to make her feel like I was there for her, but she kept telling me she didn't believe in my love and that I was selfish, manipulative, and several other things.

At one point, I made myself believe that I was truly being the person she described, and I went into a crisis because, on the one hand, I was doing my best to make her feel good, and on the other hand, she described me as a monster.

I realized that she was only taking her frustrations out on me and looking for ways to take advantage of my vulnerability toward her. Our relationship wasn't moving us toward anything positive, and just like "i", i decided to leave.

I agree with the message of the game. If you've suffered abuse, if you've been manipulated or hurt in any way, that doesn't give you the right to do the same to anyone else, it's about healing the pain not spreading it

The music is glitching, I press the sound button but I only hear a few notes and then the game goes silent

I like it a lot, the main melody is very catchy, i also like the pitch change in the middle, very cool

Amazing stuff, the slow parts at the end are great, those are my favorite parts of the song

I like the bells, at times it reminds me of the Spyro 1 soundtrack, cool tune

Cool animations! i like the little dance

looks cool :)

Happy birthday 😎👍